The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow. You slapped me right in the heart with this. What is wrong here is that the wee ones are not bathed in the air-conditioned blessings, while those who can understand the need for air-conditioned comfort are so blessed. I loved your banter about the flies. Excellent entry.
Wow! This is so intense and yet so beautiful. You did an outstanding job of letting me slip into the mind of the MC. My daughter went on a mission trip to Nicaragua her senior year of high school. She too feel in love with the children there. I think she was surprised at the beauty she found in this place as well. This is a wonderful read. It's my favorite thus far this week.
08/20/13
Fantastic piece of writing, and a wonderful message to boot. Loved it!

God bless~
08/22/13
Congrats! God bless~
08/22/13
Congratulations Lisa on your well deserved EC win, this story was fantastic!
08/23/13
Congratulations on your EC for this moving and challenging story.
08/24/13
The message throughout your beautifully written yet heartbreaking story is memorable. Superb writing and congrats on your well deserved win!