The Official Writing Challenge
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08/08/13
Good poem with humor and plenty of good advice.

Thanks for sharing.
08/10/13
Loved it! Nice job.

God bless~
08/15/13
Congrats! God bless~
What a delightful poem. It was fun and lighthearted, but then had a powerful message at the end. My only suggestion would be to limit the exclamation points. Let your perfect words and arrangement do the exclaiming for you. This was an enjoyable read. You're definitely ready for level 3.
Congratulations on placing 1 in your level and 20 overall!! (The highest rankings can be found on the message boards)
08/22/13
Well done! You did a wonderful job weaving timeless Truth into this cute poem.
Congratulations on your level win.