The Official Writing Challenge
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08/05/13
Wow - this was clever, thought provoking, and I loved the message it brought forward.

Nicely done. Original and well done.

God bless~
08/05/13
This has an interesting and forceful message.

I wasn't sure if you were speaking to women or men. The focus seemed to go from one to the other. I think it would have been better as a warning to men against the deceiving wiles of "Jezebels."

Good choice of words to emphasize your message.
This is fascinating and quite different from anything else I've read this week. It is a thought provoker and I enjoyed the journey of examining my heart because of your words.