The Official Writing Challenge
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08/03/13
Your entry is very informative. It is interesting and well written.

I think you have trouble with formatting during the submitting phase. I usually have to preview several times before I get the white space between paragraphs.

Good job.Thanks for sharing.
08/05/13
Beautiful example of the Vine...I love the passage in John, in particular, referring to the Vine and branches. Nicely done, and on topic with a viable message, that I never tire of "reading" or "hearing."

Thank you.

God bless~
This is an interesting meditation. The opening part made the rest easy to understand.

Make sure you start a new double spaced paragraph each time someone different speaks.

I really enjoyed this analogy. I think this is a thought provoking piece and you did a nice job explaining a complicated bit of how apple trees grow.
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Congratulations for placing 6 in your level! (Highest rankings can found on the message boards)