The Official Writing Challenge
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08/01/13
Thanks for sharing this message. Humility can make a huge difference in all our relationships.
08/04/13
Your dialogue is good and you certainly held my attention.

Thanks for sharing.
08/04/13
You did a fine job of showing and telling us the high frustration of the MC. I saw the entire thing in my mind, and that MC can be any person in just about any store today. There is so much financial strain.

Great message in the end, expressing humility, and setting fine example for your child and others.

God BLess~
I used to get so mad at my husband when he would tell the kids, "Do what I say, not what I do." This story is a perfect example of why I got upset. Nice job.
08/07/13
You did a great job. I loved this story. Thank you for the reminder that we all can lose our cool when we have a conflict, and that we can still show the character of Christ as an example for others to see. Keep Writing.