The Official Writing Challenge
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06/13/13
Very touching. I enjoyed this very much. Thanks.
You have such a great message in this story. How often we, as humans, want things done in our time, not God's, but he has a reason for everything. I noticed you missed a few commas,here and there, that would really help the reader with the flow. You Have a knack for storytelling. You did a nice job of covering the topic in a sweet and original way.