The Official Writing Challenge
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Lovely poem, on topic and great message. Thanks.
I think you did a wonderful job of taking me on a journey. I could feel God's voice as the hum turned into song. Beautiful.
A lovely peace filled poem. Nice job.
Beautiful analogies. May we all reach for more of His light.
What a lovely, heartfelt poem. The words were dancing on the page and pulling me in. A good use of the topic too. Well done.
I love the line reaching out for a bud and hoping it will grow, a wonderful way of expressing the way our faith grows. I know I already left a comment but as I read this again it just spoke to my heart this morning. Your poetry is beautiful. Thanks for starting my day!