The Official Writing Challenge
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06/13/13
Lovely poem, on topic and great message. Thanks.
06/17/13
I think you did a wonderful job of taking me on a journey. I could feel God's voice as the hum turned into song. Beautiful.
06/18/13
A lovely peace filled poem. Nice job.
06/19/13
Beautiful analogies. May we all reach for more of His light.
06/19/13
What a lovely, heartfelt poem. The words were dancing on the page and pulling me in. A good use of the topic too. Well done.
06/19/13
I love the line reaching out for a bud and hoping it will grow, a wonderful way of expressing the way our faith grows. I know I already left a comment but as I read this again it just spoke to my heart this morning. Your poetry is beautiful. Thanks for starting my day!