The Official Writing Challenge
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This is beautiful! So lifelike. Very well told.I felt with your characters in the Hebraic perspective, in awe and reverence, esp. with our Master Yeshua. Thank you. You brought this story afresh and alive in my heart! Shalom!
Definitely a unique angle on this well-known period in Jesus' ministry. I think it helps to provide a deeper meaning to what Christ accomplished during the 40 day fast. The writing drew me in and I was anxious to see how the story would develop and to understand each of the characters a little better. Great job!
06/13/13
Fantastic piece of writing, you've managed to pull the entire story together, and keep it fresh.

God bless~