The Official Writing Challenge
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06/07/13
Loved this totally unique take on the topic. I find your way of presenting refreshing and very interesting. I enjoyed this very much! Great job@
06/07/13
Oh, I like this!

I didn't realize this was a rhyming poem until the third stanza. To me, at least, "warning" and "danger" don't rhyme, and "fear" and "her" don't rhyme to me either.

Nice job with this, overall, and I love the concept/style.
06/13/13
I enjoyed this totally. I'm not one that understands the "formalities" of poems, I just know I loved this. It held a powerfully inspiring message. Thank you for this uplifting entry.

God bless~