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I am very sorry to read about your loss. May God's peace comfort you and your family. I thought this was a very moving piece and I the pulse of the poem was well-done.
This is a beautiful tribute, not just to Sean, but to all families who sacrifice so much to help keep me safe. The words, thank you, don't feel adequate. The timing with Memorial Day approaching is perfect, but we need that sense of gratitude all year long. Thank you.
06/11/13
So sorry for your significant loss. My gosh this poem was lovely and moving, and sombering at once.

Thank you for sharing this tribute about Sean, the love you felt for him was palpable in this beautiful piece.

God bless~
06/11/13
I relate to your pain because my son was a sailor during war time, too. Thankfully, he came home.

Your tribute to Sean is well written and touching. Thanks for sharing.
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