The Official Writing Challenge
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11/14/05
How comforting to know that despite lacking physically, we can still be beautiful to God. :)
I noticed a couple spots of misspelled words, and be careful with words that don't need apostrophes (such as "fingers"). Just needs a bit of polish.
Thank you for sharing this piece. :)
11/19/05
A touching piece. Have your work proofed. I think you have a message to tell, with work it will come out.
11/19/05
The very first sentence..."leaves" instead of leaf; therefore, I found myself noticing grammar and misspelled words instead of the subject; so work on proofreading...thanks for sharing.
I thought this was just as your title read...... The Words of A Beautiful Soul. Keep writing God's Spirit truly is in your soul....