The Official Writing Challenge
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I truly enjoyed this devotion. Usually I would caution you to be consistent with the POV and try not to switch from second person to first, but you really made it work and that's not easy to do. You took what could have been a preachy piece and converted it to a delightful testimony. The prayer was wonderful too. Many people may not know how to pray and you did a great job of showing it's like talking to a good friend.
05/31/13
Lovely, and purposeful. God bless~
06/02/13
This is both devotional and uplifting to me. God is so patient with us though He indeed knows us well. So glad He loves us anyway! Good writing.
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