The Official Writing Challenge
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05/25/13
This was a interesting tale that really held my attention from start to finish. Good ending, he stuck to his convictions...I enjoyed it. Thank you.

God bless~
05/28/13
How sad. I can see how poor Amanda would have a hard time trying to keep her real life in order, while suffering through some of the slice of life moments like her detective agency. She was definitely right about keeping the name. I felt sorry for her that Adam walked out, but if he was willing to walk out, then it was best that he did just walk away.

Sad ending, but quite realistic and I'm glad the title gave a hint of what was coming. good job! Thanks for sharing!
06/04/13
I've just looked again at what I wrote...I should have added, "good ending in that in portraying a realistic conclusion" as not all scenarios off the "paper" of the writer's mind necessarily have "happy outcomes." Again, very good tale, good job!

God Bless~