The Official Writing Challenge
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05/25/13
Such a wonderful story with a fantastic message...I loved the ending. Thank you.

God bless~
05/28/13
Bullying is really quite horrible. It's so sad to think of how cruel other children can be, simply because someone else is different. I really felt for the poor MC and I'm glad that Klara was able to step up for him. It always bugs me when I know there are others who watch someone being bullied and they never do anything about it.

Great ending and good plot. The twist of using "ding dong" and "dung dong" was very realistic, because that's definitely what would happen in a situation like this. Good job writing on a difficult theme.

Thanks for sharing.