The Official Writing Challenge
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05/24/13
Excellent dialogue and visual images of the MC in anguish, and the strong message of God's persistence at the door of our hearts, no matter what!very well done!
05/25/13
Very powerful and moving story that held my attention from start to finish. Excellent message in this well-written entry.

God bless~
05/28/13
Oh I LOVE it. This was SO well done. I was wondering at first, what kind of Dad it was and how they'd gotten to this point, but halfway through, I realized where you were headed with it and everything clicked into place. You could add more details to this, if you want, it's nicely done and I wouldn't mind reading more of it.

Great job--thanks for sharing and good ending! I like the way the title fits into it.
05/30/13
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