The Official Writing Challenge
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05/25/13
Excellent work with the Biblical account of Leviticus 8...Great job with this descriptive piece.

Thank you. God bless~
Oh to write like this . . .
05/28/13
Quite beautifully done. You manage to show quite a bit using so few words, that it makes it hold more of an impact. I liked it and the short, two-word lines, like "We wait" and "we pray" really helped to add to the atmosphere of the piece.

Love the way you tied it into the topic. Great job. Thanks for sharing!
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