The Official Writing Challenge
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11/14/05
A sweet story. :) Thank you.
11/17/05
I really enjoyed this story. However, I got a little confused with the switch between the use of 'Mother' and 'Lisa'. Thanks for sharing!
11/18/05
Got bogged down in the first paragraph; beautiful adverbs, adjectives and description of rain... but didn't hold my interest...sorry. Got to grab the Reader! Good writing however.
11/19/05
Neat little story, a bunch of grammatical issues, but none the less a story to be told. Thanks for posting.