The Official Writing Challenge
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05/25/13
Great sentiment with this well-written entry. I enjoyed this piece with the message it brought forward.

God Bless~
Rivetting - I couldn't put this down . . .
05/26/13
You had me from word one and I couldn't stop. Well told. Great message. Well done.
This is really a powerful story. At first I wasn't sure if I would like the POV in the second person as it can come across as a bit preachy. Perhaps, I thought, if the you was an actual character it might pull the reader in more. But the more I read, the more I decided I did like this voice. It almost felt like God was speaking directly to me, asking me what did I let go by unnoticed in my quest to just get through the day.I think you did a nice job with this creative and fresh story. It definitely makes one stop and think and that is always a good thing.
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