The Official Writing Challenge
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05/22/13
Sometimes one has to wait for the whole story. Well done. Thank you.
05/22/13
Ahhh, sweet ending to this mother-son conversation. One thing to watch when writing is repeating words. I saw quite a bit of that. Loved this story!
05/22/13
awww. I loved this whole thing! It was so good, and a real powerful ending.

Nice job. God bless~
The ending charms me. A good, interesting story.

If I may, please consider a spellchecker and punctuation guide. I understand all too well the desire to SHOUT using capital letters and exclamation points. I have been red penciled quite a few times for flying with these.

All in all, a terrific exchange between mother and sin, and a thoroughly enjoyable read . . .