The Official Writing Challenge
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05/21/13
You drew me in immediately with your gripping descriptions and emotions.

Very well written.
05/22/13
Well done job with this story. Thank you.
Wow. Forceful, rivetting . . .
05/22/13
Excellent descriptions pertaining to the Lot's wife and her possible POV. Vivid details helped bring it home. Nicely done.

God Bless~
You did a fantastic job on this piece. You have a wonderful way of keeping the suspense going. Great job
Wonderful! Congratulations!
05/25/13
At first I thought this could have been the moments after our Savior returns in flaming fire. Your gripping story serves as a reminder of what will one day come to be. Well written, gritty and raw. Congrats!
Very edgy; I enjoyed this a lot. Congrats on a well deserved win.