The Official Writing Challenge
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05/21/13
Your entry is catchy, on topic and interesting. Could be a good devotional. Nice job.
05/22/13
Good story. Thank you.
Excellent . . .
05/22/13
Beautiful, moving and touching. Nicely done.

God bless~
This is an interesting testimonial. You did a nice job of pulling the reader in and taking them on journey of your life from babyhood to adulthood.

You may want to consider focusing on just one story,say the heart attack and really expand on that. You don't need to use the topic word for the story to be on topic. There have been many winners who were spot on topic but never use the word. The opposite can be true too. Sometimes the topic word is in there but the story isn't truly on topic.

You did do a nice job of writing on topic. I just wanted to read more which is a good sign. You have some wonderful stories in you. Keep writing, for only you can tell the stories God places on your heart.
Congratulations on placing 6th in your level and 18 overall!