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05/22/13
I thought the first mention of father was God, because it was capitalized. But then God came in later. Good story. Thank you.
05/22/13
Really liked the analogy. Thanks for sharing!
Gripping! I won't smell a cucumber without recalling this excellent article . . .
05/22/13
Good story! I really liked this! God bless~
This is a wonderful devotion. I really liked how you started with the real life explanation that so many of us can understand. Some of your sentences felt a bit formal, more like an essay than a friend sharing a revelation. I think if you vary your sentence structures some it might make a difference. For example the opening line could go like this: Depending on where we live, God teaches us the lessons we need to survive.
I know that may seem like a tiny thing but it helps keep the reader invested. Your message is a great one and you really made me stop and think. Sadly some may call it evolution, but you showed it really is because we have a father who loves us so much and shows his love with things just like you described. Great job