The Official Writing Challenge
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Very good writing. The flow of thought and style is smooth through to finish. You got me engaged. :-) Thank you
This is Great! How often the enemy comes to us in our menial tasks of the day. Aaa,Swedish Meatballs. Might I say, that is no menial task. I bet they were delicious as your writing is. Kudos to you my dear. There was only one spot I feel I need to comment on. In the 2nd from the last paragraph you wrote "come over me" instead of "came over me". Maybe I'm wrong, and then forget what I wrote but, I think you need a past tense rather then present. Anyways, other than that, you did a wonderful job. Great Writing!
Beautiful sentences in this piece that were very moving. Well done!
Congratulations on ranking 6 in your level!