The Official Writing Challenge
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11/14/05
Excellent, vivid. I love well written pieces like this one. I'll be back to read it again later, thanks.
11/15/05
Very good free verse.
11/15/05
How beautiful and what imagery? Sounds like a place we all should visit. Isn't God's earth breathtaking?! Great poem:)
11/15/05
Wow! Terrific free verse! You did a great job maintaining the same feel and sound throughout.
This is so very evocative, conjuring strong images. I love the way you have used words like a paint brush on cavass to layer a colourful and vivid picture. This is beautiful. God bless.
11/18/05
As a rule, I'm not into free verse; but this was a pleasant, beautiful scene that I could almost touch...awesome and so surreal...thank you for sharing.
I just loved this! Thank you!
chaline, you're a true wordsmith--beautiful writing! I'll be looking for your work each week to read and enjoy!