The Official Writing Challenge
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This is really fascinating. I think you did a wonderful job of writing on topic. I especially enjoyed the vision of a sizzling drip. Now that's creative. Just remember the top ten stories overall are put in an anthology and that reader may know nothing of FW or the challenge. Overall I think you did a nice job. This is a story to make a person stop and think which is always good.
05/14/13
Your entry is creative. I enjoyed reading it.

Thanks.