The Official Writing Challenge
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Very informative piece. I enjoyed the first and last two sentences, and although the body was indeed interesting, it read a little too much like a research paper. I thought the title was very creative and I think I was expecting a creative story, with characters and dialogue, to go with it. As an informative piece, though, it was very well written.
05/05/13
I think your entry is well written and informative. It is a little too much information without enough creativity.

Thanks for sharing.
This is really interesting. I like your take on the essay. My only comment would be the number of times you used the word drip. I'd challenge you to write on topic without ever even using the topic word. it's difficult, but I believe you are talented enough to pull it off. Keep writing my friend. :)