The Official Writing Challenge
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05/05/13
This poem is on topic and it has a great flow. I enjoyed your descriptive way of telling an all to familiar story.

Good job.
05/07/13
You expressed it so well in this poem of Jesus anguish between His human side and God's perfect plan of Salvation. Very well done.
05/09/13
Congratulations on placing 2nd in your level and 18 overall!