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04/30/13
Powerful. Enjoyed the extended metaphors and food for thought. To Him be the glory!
04/30/13
You have great reminders from Scripture in the intricately woven story. You've got me thinking. Thanks!
Your beginning really intrigued me. My mind raced to the different reasons why the MC would have lost her memory. I was eager to read on.

The middle confused me a tad, but that could be just my tired mind.

I liked the Bible verses as they helped the MC muddle through. The analogy of how God's Word will get us through the toughest times is a powerful one indeed. Good job.
I have great gaping holes in my memory bank, therefore I empathize. This is quite a story . . .
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