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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 2 – Intermediate)
Topic: Click (04/18/13)

TITLE: Quick As A Click
By Graham Insley
04/22/13


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You've got to be nimble,
You've got to be quick,
It's all going to happen,
As quick as a click.
One day you'll be waiting
The next day He's come;
It's the end of all time,
It's over it's done.

Suddenly He's here
Just like He said,
Life will come back
Re-enter the dead.
Choices once made
Now are revealed,
Sheep or a goat
Your eternity sealed.

All born into sin
It has its price,
It's not about bad
Or just being nice.
It's how we see Him
A heavenly Dad,
A ransom paid
Or a passing fad.

The Messiah is life
It's upstairs or down,
Sackcloth forever
Or a royal crown.
Sin will get paid
Collect its due,
But here's a hint
Follow my clue.

I'm now adopted
Son of a King,
All of His praises
I joyfully sing.
I chose to believe
Made the right pick,
Then I was reborn
As quick as a click.

Jump on the wagon
Come hitch a ride,
Where together we
Will eternally bide.
Streets of gold
Man it's so slick,
An eye will twink
As quick as a click


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Judith Gayle Smith04/25/13
I love good poetry, and this is insightful and delightful, could be frightful, but is Light full . . .

Emjoyed this very much!
Shann Hall-LochmannVanBennekom 04/27/13
This is really lovely. The rhymes are great and it flows so nicely. The message is as great one too.
Brenda Rice 04/29/13
Your poem is light hearted even though the subject matter is heavy. You did great with the rhyme and it flows easy off the tongue.
Fiona Stevenson04/30/13
Good message, well written. I stumbled once or twice on the metre, probably my reading; a couple of commas needed. Minor things, easily corrected. God bless you.
Shann Hall-LochmannVanBennekom 05/02/13
Congratulations on placing 4 in your level and 34 overall! (The highest rankings can be found on the message boards at http://www.faithwriters.com/Boards/phpBB2/viewtopic.php?f=55&t=36971&sid=fc51905b09e1c3a6153917b33a0614a4 )
Shann Hall-LochmannVanBennekom 05/02/13
Congratulations on placing 4 in your level and 34 overall! (The highest rankings can be found on the message boards at http://www.faithwriters.com/Boards/phpBB2/viewtopic.php?f=55&t=36971&sid=fc51905b09e1c3a6153917b33a0614a4 )
Judith Gayle Smith05/03/13
Congratulations!