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I love good poetry, and this is insightful and delightful, could be frightful, but is Light full . . .

Emjoyed this very much!
This is really lovely. The rhymes are great and it flows so nicely. The message is as great one too.
04/29/13
Your poem is light hearted even though the subject matter is heavy. You did great with the rhyme and it flows easy off the tongue.
Good message, well written. I stumbled once or twice on the metre, probably my reading; a couple of commas needed. Minor things, easily corrected. God bless you.
Congratulations on placing 4 in your level and 34 overall! (The highest rankings can be found on the message boards at http://www.faithwriters.com/Boards/phpBB2/viewtopic.php?f=55&t=36971&sid=fc51905b09e1c3a6153917b33a0614a4 )
Congratulations on placing 4 in your level and 34 overall! (The highest rankings can be found on the message boards at http://www.faithwriters.com/Boards/phpBB2/viewtopic.php?f=55&t=36971&sid=fc51905b09e1c3a6153917b33a0614a4 )
Congratulations!