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11/14/05
Very well done very, poignantly written, magical indeed.
11/14/05
Seeing the world through the eyes of a child! How precious and beautiful life is to us when we look at it from a childlike perspective. Good article!
11/14/05
How many times I'd like to tell God, "Do it again!" :) Well-written. Thank you.
11/14/05
Such descriptive beauty and then the child's line..I loved it! Made me smile!
You painted a "beautiful" picture of a special moment between father and son! Good job!
11/15/05
I really liked most of this, living on the coast, my children and grandchildren have had much the same experience. For the most part this is very realistic and touching.
thanks for posting.
11/16/05
This is lovely. Reminds me of those moments in life that you don't want to end. Good job.
11/16/05
A very enjoyable read. Good job!
11/17/05
I loved the "do it again" line. That summed it all up quite nicely!
11/20/05
A truly magic moment. Thank you for sharing it. (Try to rephrase you sentences so that you don't write 'as' so frequently,)Yeggy
11/21/05
Colorful Delightful and Beautiful. Blessing. Helen