The Official Writing Challenge
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04/11/13
This is a beautiful, faith filled and inspirational poem. A true delight to read. I love the way you use the colours to highlight God's creation. I like the way you ended it too with the passage from Revelation. It tied in and rounded the piece off well. Great job.
04/11/13
I could imagine heaven when I read your lovely descriptions of the colors God reveals to us everyday. Thanks for reminding me of these beautiful things I sometimes take for granted. This is just mesmerizing. Your poetry paints such beautiful images.
You have splashed my heart with your paeon of praise to our wondrous Creator . . .
This is really beautiful. The words just flow off the page. You covered the topic in a fresh way. I really like the splashes of colors. The words you chose painted a beautiful picture and brought a smile to my soul.
04/13/13
Oh how I wish I could do what you did in this poem! I love that you included the passage in Revelation because that's what I thought of when I read it. Oh what a sight it will be to behold. You've captured it magnificently!
04/13/13
Epic! Beautiful, descriptive, and truly captivating!

God bless~
04/13/13
Beautiful artistic words splashed across the canvas of God's creation. Lovely and rhythmic. A joy to read and mediate upon!
04/14/13
So many beautiful descriptions in here. Splashes of God's color are all around us.

When you switched voices from "we" to "I" it threw me off a little. But no big deal.

Good job, keep writing!
04/14/13
I really liked your descriptions, especially of the sunset. Beautiful!
04/15/13
I am a person who loves color. It feeds my soul! :) So I very much enjoyed your color-full poem! One of my favorite parts was:

"Soft, gentle, rainbows
follow God's
lightning-streaked-skies.

God's special
colors
as the earth
washes, then dries."

Very descriptive!