The Official Writing Challenge
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"Precious drops of Christ’s blood
Sweaty splashes in the sand
Tell of Jesus’ saving power
O’er all the earth’s great land."

Wow. This is so real.

This is really lovely. The words just flow off the page naturally yet telling the most wonderful story ever. You have a natural gift of forming the words just so. I also enjoyed the subtle, yet powerful reference to the topic. It was just the right touch.
04/13/13
I felt the Lord's presence and could sense the anointing that came over you as the words flowed so powerfully, yet beautifully.

Thank you! God bless~
04/14/13
Your poem was well-written and thought out, expressing a true appreciation for our Savior and what He did for us by His sacrifice. Thank you for this beautiful reminder.