The Official Writing Challenge
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Sweet and truly beautiful . . .
This is a nice testimonial. It is so important that parents understand that they must be good examples for their kids.

Some sentences were just a tiny bit awkward. Try reading the story aloud or even better have someone else read it and if they stumble over a sentence, then it might need some reworking. For example the line I'm grateful my parents taught me love, you need the word to before respect.

I think you did a nice job on covering the topic and told a good message as well. Nice job.
04/13/13
Deep message that will touch many. Nicely done.

God bless~