The Official Writing Challenge
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04/11/13
Very moving. I love all the interaction, most especially Jesus through the children to help mom find the beam in her eye. I really love this.
04/12/13
This is a nice take on the topic. I really enjoyed the tender interaction of the sister and her plea to her mother. I cringed a bit when she said that Jesus called her a bad girl. As a mom I'm very aware of not telling the child that she is bad, but more that she made an inappropriate choice. I do think you did a nice job on this story and it teachers a valuable lesson, little ones pick up a lot and tend to mimic their parents so it's vital to act in a way we would want our kids to behave.
04/13/13
I loved this whole piece, wonderful job.

God bless~