The Official Writing Challenge
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03/14/13
I think this is a great story. You covered the topic and I found myself first smiling and then wincing. You did a good job.
03/14/13
Oooh, good job with this whole piece. It is packed with emotions in a short but powerful way.

God bless~
03/18/13
Interesting, short and sweet story. Kept my attention throughout. Good job.
03/19/13
Very descriptive and I actually had to say "ouch" out loud. Very well written and I wanted to read more.
03/19/13
A child and curiousity - the natural order of things. Great story!