The Official Writing Challenge
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I think this is a great story. You covered the topic and I found myself first smiling and then wincing. You did a good job.
Oooh, good job with this whole piece. It is packed with emotions in a short but powerful way.

God bless~
Interesting, short and sweet story. Kept my attention throughout. Good job.
Very descriptive and I actually had to say "ouch" out loud. Very well written and I wanted to read more.
A child and curiousity - the natural order of things. Great story!