The Official Writing Challenge
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I really enjoyed the story and I think many people will be able to relate to it. I love how God gently throws bricks at us when we don't want to listen to him, but he never give up on us. Your story shows that wonderful relationship.

I noticed some errors that a good profreader would help you catch, like ministers shouldn't be capitalized. Also you used the word sharp a few times and at times it felt forced. Your story can be on topic even if you never use the topic word.

I did really enjoy this story. I found it to be believable with loving characters, natural dialog, and a wonderful messages. You did a fantastic job.
03/14/13
Good job with this entry that held an authentic tone. Nicely told, I enjoyed it.

God bless~
03/19/13
Very nicely written. I always have admired those who have calling of missions.
03/22/13
I should have indicated that this is a true story, written from my Father's point of view.
In his memory: James L. Bass
03/22/13
What a wonderful tribute to your Father's willingness to be used of The Lord in foreign lands. Thank you for sharing it with us!
03/23/13
Great tribute to your dad. Great story and message too that really make me think about things Bea and I are going through. God does direct us like this if we are willing. I am willing Lord. What would you have us do?