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I really enjoyed the story and I think many people will be able to relate to it. I love how God gently throws bricks at us when we don't want to listen to him, but he never give up on us. Your story shows that wonderful relationship.

I noticed some errors that a good profreader would help you catch, like ministers shouldn't be capitalized. Also you used the word sharp a few times and at times it felt forced. Your story can be on topic even if you never use the topic word.

I did really enjoy this story. I found it to be believable with loving characters, natural dialog, and a wonderful messages. You did a fantastic job.
Good job with this entry that held an authentic tone. Nicely told, I enjoyed it.

God bless~
Very nicely written. I always have admired those who have calling of missions.
I should have indicated that this is a true story, written from my Father's point of view.
In his memory: James L. Bass
What a wonderful tribute to your Father's willingness to be used of The Lord in foreign lands. Thank you for sharing it with us!
Great tribute to your dad. Great story and message too that really make me think about things Bea and I are going through. God does direct us like this if we are willing. I am willing Lord. What would you have us do?