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Topic: Sharp (03/07/13)
TITLE: A Broken Vessel
By Graham Insley
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“Whisky.” It was nothing more than a whisper in Travis’ mind a few minutes later as he drove by a bottle shop. “Come on, no one could blame you for one small soothing drink”
“Are you okay, mister?”
“Yeah, just a little shook up is all. Give us a bottle of JD will you?”
At home, Travis’ shaking hands filled a glass with the silky, amber liquid. Unable to even take a sip, he dropped onto a kitchen chair; his head falling into his hands and his tears drenching the table.
Fifteen years Sheila had been his wife. They had drank and fought for the first eight of those years. For the last seven they had worshiped, sang praises and rejoiced in their new found faith; sober and never touching a drop. In the last six months he saw her waste away to a thin, frail frame as cancer ravaged her body.
Tonight she lost the fight and the band around Travis’ throat threatened to choke the very life out of him. The pain in his heart, sharp and intense, felt like a scalpel cutting it into little pieces.
“No one could blame you, Travis. At a time like this a man needs a drink.” The whispers came again; subtle, cajoling and offering an escape. The fumes from the glass added to the temptation as a dark spiritual hand fanned them towards his nose.
For Deathstrike, the demon whispering in Travis’ ear, the room suddenly brightened and his mood darkened. With lightening speed his curved, razor sharp sword was in his hands, swinging in a full circle straight out from his body. Any angel within ten feet should simply have been cut in two.
Eli ducked beneath the killing swipe. Two quick steps, a one hundred and eighty degree pivot and he ended up facing the ugly demon he opposed. But their positions were now reversed and Eli stood at Travis’ side.
“You need to leave this saint alone, Deathstrike, and I’m here to make sure you do”
Eli kept one eye on the curved sword as he blew over the top of the whiskey glass; dispelling the tempting fumes. “Don’t throw it all away now, Travis. Sheila wouldn’t want that.”
“Back off, you angelic fool; I have a right to be here. When this idiot pulled the cork out of the bottle, he also pulled out the stops of restraint that protected him from me.”
“Wrong! Until he drinks from that glass he has not yet surrendered. And he has a right to struggle for his faith without your meddling.”
A very brief moment, the smallest respite from the agony torturing his soul, was all it took for Travis’ mind to suddenly become crystal clear and sharper than the pain ripping him apart. He saw it clearly now.
“Father, I don’t want to throw away the last seven years, dishonoring all You did for us. Give me strength and I will stand for You and Sheila through this.”
With that, Travis emptied both the glass and the rest of the bottle down the sink.
Eli smiled as he looked at the sharp pieces of the shattered bottle in the rubbish.
“Out of their sharpest pain comes their greatest victory, Deathstrike. Think about that before you inflict more of your torment on the true saints of God.”
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