The Official Writing Challenge
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I really enjoyed the story. I think you did a great job of developing the characters and covering the topic. You need to be careful with lines like this: grabbed a microphone with a somber look on his face. Because it can seem like the microphone as a somber look. You just need to rearrange it so that the last part is closer to the pastor. Overall, I like your take on the topic and you did a great job.
Great job with this entry, I enjoyed your story, and it was a clever approach to the topic at hand.

Thanks. God bless~
Ah, I remember the days of youth led services. This piece brought back memories. Good job on a creative and believeable piece. Every good Pastor will take a curveball and weave it into a sermon, as Pastor Keith did. Well done; I enjoyed this.
Sweet, understanding and compassionate. I love this.