The Official Writing Challenge
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02/24/13
Awww. This was so touching it made my eyes tear up...Lovely writing and a lovely message.

Thank you. God bless~
I really enjoyed this piece. My daughter was married in October so this piece brought back a myriad of feelings.

Remember when using Mom and Dad as names to capitalize the first letter. I think if you had named the daughter it would pull the reader into the story more.

I think this is a lovely idea, especially with the state of things in the world. Daddies are meant to protect their daughters, to be a living example of how a man should treat her, and make sure she will accept no less. This was a great take on the topic and I enjoyed it all.
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