The Official Writing Challenge
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02/08/13
This was a good story, I wish I had a little more info on who "Charlie was" and why he was so upset with the MC. But, I drew my own conclusions about what might have happened.

Nicely done...I'm so happy that God WON again in the ending. Beautifully said.

God bless~
02/14/13
I was a little confused about the past and present but I liked your characters. I hate conflict in church.