The Official Writing Challenge
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02/02/13
This was so sweet...and a lovely tribute to teachers. I really liked it. Thank you. God bless~
02/03/13
Liked how the boys' relationships developed. Enjoyed the story.
I think you did a nice job of bringing a serious subject to the forefront of people's minds. It's something that pretty much anyone can relate to on onr level or another.
02/04/13
I enjoyed this story. I could envision Mr. Redel raising that eyebrow. Nice. Our kids today really need some good role models that teach caring about others. Peer pressure weighs heavily on the kids, and they need to witness love in action by their role models.
I was not certain that this was quite on topic, sorry, maybe I'm not seeing it. But this is Good job