The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a charming exchange between mother and daughter. The ending is really sweet and leaves me with a lovely picture in my head.
01/26/13
Awww this touched my heart and made it smile.
Thanks.

God bless~
01/28/13
I like the dialog between characters. But I thought maybe the girl's realization came rather abruptly. I just felt there shoulod have been a more gradual transition (Maybe it's just me?). Love the history of hymns, I have a book on about 150 of them and how they came to be favorites, history, etc. Keep on writing, you're doin great.
02/10/13
It is a sweet article, but adding an unexpected clever twist to it would might make such a scene more enticing.