The Official Writing Challenge
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You make some great points in this charming poem. Good job.
Sweet, loving and touching.

God bless~
Enjoyed your poem. Had just a bit of trouble tying it all together and grasping the main point, but I think I do now. Keep writing for Jesus! "Only one life will soon be past and only what's done for Christ will last. (:
Thank you for this heart felt poem. Good job and keep writing.