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Very good job with this moving piece with a prolific message.

Good story telling.

God bless~
I enjoyed your story. It was very touching. Thank you and God bless.
You did a nice job of showing thew conflict and pain in the officer. It's easy to forget sometimes that those who serve the public are really people who grieve and get overtired. Nice job.
I enjoyed this realistic story. I have several friends on the police force and get to hear lots of stories just like this one voluteering my time assisting the chaplain.
Good job of conveying that "we are all human" idea (make mistakes)through the cop's emotional mistake, and the Pastors mistake of driving too sleepy.
Congratulations for ranking 6th in level two!
Congratulations for ranking 6th in level two!