The Official Writing Challenge
This article has been read 628 times
Member Comments
Member
Date
11/07/05
Your descriptive words are geat! "yawning gaps' I think you said..(I haven't figured out how to go abck and reread it.lol) but I know that your story would present better if you separated your paragraphs and especially your opening lines.
11/08/05
Yikes! I don't know if I could have crossed those bridges at all, let alone with a baby in my arms! Very good descriptions.
11/11/05
Wow to trust a friend with your child.. how much more should we put our trust in JESUS.. Thanks for sharing.