The Official Writing Challenge
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01/24/13
I loved this piece. You really made me feel it, and that's the essence of poetry.
01/25/13
This was really powerful. Loved the last line.
Great job with this entry.

God bless~
A beautiful heart felt poem. Thank you and God bless.
01/29/13
I like the progression of this heartfelt poem.
This is positively beautiful. It reminds me of some of my poems where the MC starts out in a dark place, but after searching, she finds God and his glorious light. I feel like you have been camping out in my brain and knew the perfect words to say. You have blessed me immensely.
01/30/13
Loved this piece. Truly wonderful. I felt the emotion the MC was feeling all the way through.
Thank you for wrapping us up in His sublime Comfort . . .