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01/19/13
You truly have a gift for vivid descriptions. This is a work of art! Your writing flows and lifts me up. Great job!
Wow this is a powerful poem. I totally enjoyed this and found myself leaning in, eager to capture every word.
01/21/13
Oh, I like this. I especially liked the stanzas about the changing seasons.
01/22/13
This was lovely to read and wonderfully descriptive. It is so true -
'Years rolling quietly,
too quickly as dawn
gives way to twilight' - reminding us to 'measure our days rightly. I enjoyed this - thank you.
01/22/13
Expecially beautiful! Nice...God bless~
01/23/13
Lovely descriptions in this wonderful poem! I especially liked the stanza:

"Snow melting into
Violet, yellow and
springtime greens."

You used vivid verbs and colorful adjectives that make this piece sing!

Great writing! :)