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01/17/13
This brought me to tears. My dad (who wasn't much of a singer either) :) used to sing this to me when I was little too. He died last November so it is a particular blessing that you brought that memory back.
01/18/13
Beautifully written, with such a lovely warm treatment of the subject. I loved it.
This is an endearing read. I smiled as I pictured the young girl double-stepping to keep up with her daddy as they sang a special song.

I noticed some tiny errors that a challenge buddy or crit group might help you spot. For instance, you had its' instead of its and an ellipsis has only three dots. Check the message board if you're interested in finding a buddy or send me a PM and I'll try to hook you up with someone.

Overall it was a sweet story with a powerful message. You covered the topic and left me with a smile and a warm fuzzy feeling.
01/22/13
This made me smile. Nice story overall. God bless~
01/28/13
I now have a cute little ditty in my head. Your piece made me smile and caused me to sit in awe while contemplating God's unconditional, Enormous love. Thank you