The Official Writing Challenge
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This is an interesting and well-written essay. You mentioned a few things that I hadn't heard of before. Make sure though, if you quote someone that you include the information in a footnote (An author's note doesn't add to the word count. I have never heard of Dennis Prager. You may want to cite the works from which you are quoting and tell the reader who the person is. You did a nice job of covering the topic in an educational and different way. Nice job.
Because of your presentation, this factual piece came off almost poetic. Well done
01/22/13
Interesting piece. Nicely done. Thanks. God bless~