The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a fascinating piece. It feels like it came right from your heart. I also like how you wrote on topic with only mentioning the word once. I thought you'd make it all the way through but then you slipped it in in the end. This piece though is a great example of how it is possible to be on topic without using or overusing the word. You have a powerful message and the piece is well written.
01/21/13
You have written a very deep and anionted article. I was drawn in to it and felt the struggle of measuring up, but then there is God's grace
which is sufficient. The ending I felt could be reworked but was still beautiful. Good work.

sharon force
01/22/13
Fabulous bit of writing and an intense read. Thank you.
God bless~
Congratulations on your HC in level 2 and for ranking 35th overall!
01/25/13
Congrats. God bless~